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Critiquing Another Photographer's Academic Shoot
https://laurasphoto1.blogspot.com/2018/09/academic-shoot.html I chose to look at Laura's photos! Positive Feedback: 1. I like how Laura captures her rule of thirds picture. The boy has a slight smile on his face and the background includes good contrasting colors. 2. I like how in Laura's photo with the rule of lines the ceiling's lines lead to the girl working on her assignment. The lines on the locker also lead to the subject's paper! Improvements: 1. I think in her avoiding merger picture she could avoid having a merger by capturing the photo at a different angle. Instead of straight on, the camera could be looking down or up at the boy working on a paper.
Merger Photo
1. The photo looks curved which can be un realistic. And we don't want unrealistic photos!!! 2. I think the football field by the track because there is a huge field with a big sky and a lot of trees, grass and open land for depth. 3. I can hold a different pose in each picture with a volleyball. In one I can set, in one I can hit, in one I can pass and in the last two I can hold the volleyball in two different poses(staying still with he ball In my hand or on my hip). 4. I could wear my volleyball uniform and put my hair up!
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